Pretty funny dazza but i think that it next time you sould try using sencents insted of just words but it still realy funny.
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August 13th, 2008 at 4:54 am
Go the Crows!
Good use of rhyming.
Nice work.
Miss W
August 14th, 2008 at 10:16 pm
Great poem dazza my mum likes lots
October 13th, 2008 at 3:05 am
Pretty funny dazza but i think that it next time you sould try using sencents insted of just words but it still realy funny.